Which would you prefer?

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—–Original Message—–
From: Gary Ploski
Sent: Tuesday, May 31, 2005 8:13 PM
To: Nicholas Dionisio; Fran Mahoney
Cc: Ali Berman
Subject: Mortgage Paperwork

I just realized that Ali and I haven’t received the lock in paperwork for our mortgage. This was mailed last week sometime after we locked in last Sunday. Curiously… Where was it sent?

Gary Ploski

Would you prefer to have response A or B? I’m thinking B.

A
Date: Wed, 1 Jun 2005 08:44:47 -0400
From: Fran Mahoney
To: Gary Ploski
Subject: RE: Mortgage Paperwork
Last Sunday meaning Memorial Day week-end? If so you lost a day or two because of the holiday.

Francine M. Mahoney

B
Date: Wed, 1 Jun 2005 09:49:48 -0400
From: Nicholas Dionisio
To: Gary Ploski
Subject: RE: Mortgage Paperwork

Gary

To assure that this is taken care of faster, would I be able to fax the paper work to you today? My assistant is tracking down the paper work now, but I don’t want to delay anything. Let me know what you think and I can have everything set up to be faxed to you. Thanks.

Nicholas Dionisio

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